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Does anyone ever felt like Alice in Wonderland

Wandering around the world

Following a white rabbit that no one else sees

Talking to a caterpillar

Asking Why, Who, and What

Finding yourself lost in a place with unreadable signs

Sitting down thinking….dreaming or not this is unbelievable

When a cat comes floating down sitting on a tree

His smile is remarkably sharp for a cat to be

He is sly, that cat, should I believe him or not

I guess I have no choice

The flower talk and I have some tea

With figures of my imagination

The Mad Hatter is crazy

The March Hare is unstable

I don't think their are any normal things here

A drunken mouse come out of the pot

I think I'm losing my mind….

What next do I occur…A red queen that is

A court full of cards

Spades, Diamonds, Hearts, and Clubs

OFF WITH HER HEAD!

Nothing but a dream.

Wake Up Alice!
It''s my first time writing something on here. So yeah! hope you like it (:
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Surrender-the-Rose Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012
its very interesting, i like it! :)
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kshelton2011 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Oh thank you so much for the feedback <3
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Surrender-the-Rose Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012
quite welcome :)
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kshelton2011 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
:3
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AlternativeZumWahn Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
great writing, i like the "alice-theme" very much myselve and i often thought that kind of way u wrote :)
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kshelton2011 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
oh thank you! and Yeah I always wanted to write something that portrays what i thought in wonderland :P
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xxbananaxdanx Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012
It's good. I loved it.
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kshelton2011 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you so much (: it was the first time I put one of my poems on here (: <3
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