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Roseus Papilo {{Chapter 1}}

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I do not own the picture I found it on google. I just needed an image for the story.
But anyways this is the first chapter of my new story. I'll probably change some things on it lol.
Well I hope you like it so far (:

Roseus Papilo Chapter 1

Chapter 2 -> [link]
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Wow, I feel like I've been put to shame! After I started reading this I couldn't sop! You have short but concise descriptions about surroundings and people which is good, since it matches your writing style. Still have some grammar parts that need fixing but even with them I absolutely LOVED it! Please get rid of your writers block so I can read more~!